Paper or cloth bag containing at least 4 items (could be anything
Lined paper for letter-writing
Envelope for each student (optional)
Peer Coaching Rubric
1. Objects in a Bag:
Fill a bag with 4 objects (can be random i.e. stone, rope, ring, piece of cloth, etc)
Share these objects with the students.
Ask them to choose one of the objects thinking about how it connects/relates to a character in their story
Write how this object connects to that character. Why is it important to that character. What's the story behind this object?
Ask if any students would like to share their descriptions/explanations with the class. Share them in order by object.
If not everyone has time (or wants) to share their writings, ask students to pair up and listen to each others' writings.
Then ask the partner to pick out a line, phrase or word that stands out in the writing to share with the whole class.
Teacher writes down the words or phrases on chart paper to document.
2. Peer Coaching:
3. Virginia Reel (from Children Tell Stories, p. 41):
Ask students to form two equal lines, facing each other.
Establish a loud signal (wind chimes, drum) that students can hear over their storytelling
One line tells their story to the partner facing them in the other line, simultaneously until the signal is hear (1 or 2 minutes - teacher gauges). The listening line does just that: Listen.
When the signal is sounded again, switch roles. Listeners become the tellers until the signal sounds for them to stop.
Then the first person in one line moves to the end so that everyone has a new partner.
The game continues. Tellers have a choice: they can either start their story from the beginning or continue where they left off.
This game helps build confidence in telling their stories, while having fun.
5th Week in the Library:
Materials Needed:
chart paper and markers for brainstorming Elements of a Story list
1. Ending Your Story:
Ask students to sit in a circle on the rug.
Ask them to think about where the story ends, what do you see, how would you describe it?
Is it informative, humorous, mysterious, peaceful, dangerous, peaceful, etc?
Endings are difficult because you’re back in the room and are your self. Back to reality. People don’t need to know you’re done. DON’T say THE END!
So what do we do instead? In English, we tend to slow down and drop in pitch when we end a story.
Eyes stay or linger where they are and then when they chance focus, that signals the end. Also sustain the gesture.
Ask students to turn to someone next to them and practice saying their last line. Practice as a whole class so students feel comfortable practicing. Signal for the other student in the pair to practice his/her ending.
Then ask each student to stand up and individually say their last line, being sure to slow down, lower their pitch and sustain gesture and eye contact for a moment before changing focus to signal the end.
2. Shaping Elements of a Story:
Brainstorm the shaping elements of telling a story. Lead students to a list that incorporates these elements:
VOICE: pacing/pause, volume, tone and pitch. Tone is the most important of the 4 elements of voice! It’s in the variety of all 4 that gets the attention of your story
CHOICE OF WORDS
MOVEMENT : gesture & posture
FACIAL EXPRESSION
EYE CONTACT
AUDIENCE: awareness, space (proximity to audience & within room to be sure everyone sees you). Don’t move for no reason – you must have purpose!
STILLNESS & SILENCE
TRANSITIONS – especially between scenes are often the places where you forget.
Notice that shaping elements are mostly NONVERBAL!
3. Isolating the Voice Elements:
Ask everyone to recites the nursery rhyme, Jack & Jill: very monotonous sounding
Model Pacing: Jack goes up (speak slow) Jack falls (speak quickly) Jill tumbles (speak even faster)
Model Volume: Jack goes up (speak softly), Jack falls (speak loudly), Jill tumbles (speak ever louder or softer)
Now combine these two elements and try reciting again
Tone is governed by who tells it: Practice tone using these examples: Jack’s mom on the phone with the doctor, Jack’s dad is tired of hearing about his kids’ antics. The neighbor children who can’t stand them.
Pitch was already used in ending the story, but if time, model Jack using a lower voice and Jill a higher pitched voice
Materials Needed:
1. Objects in a Bag:
2. Peer Coaching:
3. Virginia Reel (from Children Tell Stories, p. 41):
5th Week in the Library:
Materials Needed:
1. Ending Your Story:
2. Shaping Elements of a Story:
3. Isolating the Voice Elements: